Much could be said of all this I am. There is super abundance of being in this that could be a little too much for some readers who passed the mid-point may think they have read enough of this I am. I do not mind it so much as long as it gives me newness, and this does in some ways. The 'I am" has its variety.
I appreciate hearing your thoughts on this! The repetition was an intentional stylistic choice but it’s good for me to know how it reads to different people.
Much could be said of all this I am. There is super abundance of being in this that could be a little too much for some readers who passed the mid-point may think they have read enough of this I am. I do not mind it so much as long as it gives me newness, and this does in some ways. The 'I am" has its variety.
I appreciate hearing your thoughts on this! The repetition was an intentional stylistic choice but it’s good for me to know how it reads to different people.
My two favorites:
"I’m 3am.
I’m haunted.
I’m strobe lights and happy face pills.
I’m terribly alone.
I’m noon.
I’m halfway over. Halfway done.
Halfway to dead. To rot.
I’m the zenith. The peak.
I’m always looking down."
Thank you I so appreciate you sharing! I feel like there’s a common vibe between those two, I get it